Challenge #9

I actually won this challenge :D That makes me so happy! ^___^

I can't post a link to the original as it is community-locked :/ I decided to lock it because it contains some themes that some people might not be comfortable reading. But reading through it, I notice that I rated it to be "safe". I think its more like R than NC-17.

Title: Studying the Void
Challenge: Member's Challenge #9
Prompt: Both thighs squeeze tight and Choke choke choke choke choke choke choke choke choke choke
Genre: Angst
Rating: NC-17, sex, cursing, self-destruction
( read the story on my website )

I'd love some feedback on this one. Despite the fact that I won, nobody has actually told me that they liked it or why they liked it. It would be lovely to know what you liked/didn't like/thought/felt etc.